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I didn\'t advice to my 2 sons about saving money.
I have never invested of my money.
I only save money from bank.
I didn\'t give allowances to them since they graduated at university.
I want them to build their lives by themselves.
They should adjust their financial skills.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
Good financial skills can provide a well-off life when we grow older. Young people are fortunate that the older generation are good examples of how to have a stable life even if they did not have a comfortable life in the past. I hope this will enlighten their minds to take opportunities seriously.
have a good day!
T. Aki~
I didn\'t advice to my 2 sons about saving money.
>>> I didn\'t advise my 2 sons about saving money.
I have never invested of my money.
>>> I have never invested my money.
I only save money from bank.
>>> I only save money from the bank.
I didn\'t give allowances to them since they graduated at university.
>>> I didn\'t provide allowances for them since they graduated from the university.
I want them to build their lives by themselves.
>>> CORRECT!
They should adjust their financial skills.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> They should,d have proper financial skills.
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