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Q: What activities can you do when you leave work early?
A: I think I can work out or do some entertainments.
If I leave work early, then I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of stress while working.
And I think working out and doing some entertainments are good ways to relieve stress.
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Hi, [이름]!
3. And I think working out and doing some entertainments are good ways to relieve stress.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think I can work out or do some entertainments.
>>CORRECT!
2. If I leave work early, then I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of stress while working.
>>If I leave work early, I think I would focus on relieving my stress because I might have gotten a lot of it while working.
3. And I think working out and doing some entertainments are good ways to relieve stress.
>>CORRECT!
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