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I think Chinese is the most difficult language to learn. There are many reasons but the most powerful one is that they have tones. In my opinion, the fact that the meaning changes depending on the tone makes it difficult.
I think there are two typical things. One is that people feel bored when they continue with the same pattern of daily life. The other is that they feel bored and lethargic when they have so much time to spare and there is nothing they want to do.
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I summit my first homework!
>> I am submitting my first homework!
I think Chinese is the most difficult language to learn.
There are many reasons but the most powerful one is that they have tones.
>>Correct
In my opinion, the fact that the meaning changes depending on the tone makes it difficult.
OR
>> It\'s difficult since your vocal tone affects the meaning of what you say.
I think there are two typical things.
I think there are two typical things.
>>Correct
One is that people feel bored when they continue with the same pattern of daily life.
OR
>>One is that people become bored when their daily routines remain unchanged.
The other is that they feel bored and lethargic when they have so much time to spare and there is nothing they want to do.
>>Correct
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