Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me the best vacation you had in your life.
-> I went to go Bail.
I send in Bail a month.
Bail has an amazing ocean view.
Bail has an amazing ocean color has so beautiful.
I met the turtles in the Bail Ocean.
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Good morning, Ji [이름]!
Bail has an amazing ocean view.
I met the turtles in the Bail Ocean.
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I went to go Bail.
>>> I went to Bali
I send in Bail a month.
>>> I spend a month staying in Bali.
>>> I have been to Bali for a month.
Bail has an amazing ocean view.
>>> Bali has an amazing ocean view.
Bail has an amazing ocean color has so beautiful.
>> The ocean has a beautiful color.
I met the turtles in the Bail Ocean.
>>> I saw a lot of turtles in the ocean.
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