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Q: What are some output-based projects that you want to do in the future?
A: I want the output-based projects about making programs.
I actually like developing, and it would be output-based project if I do it alone or there\'s some groups of teams.
But I think getting into output-based porjects every time is not a good idea.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I actually like developing, and it would be output-based project if I do it alone or there\'s some groups of teams.
3. But I think getting into output-based porjects every time is not a good idea.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I want the output-based projects about making programs.
>>CORRECT!
2. I actually like developing, and it would be output-based project if I do it alone or there\'s some groups of teams.
>>I actually like developing, and it would be an output-based project if I do it alone or if there are some teams.
3. But I think getting into output-based porjects every time is not a good idea.
>>But I think getting into output-based projects every time is not a good idea.
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