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Thank you teacher. today topic is very interest. This is my answer.I agree this saying. Since early years we teach our parents. So parents must exemplary conduct. because half of our life live with together.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Lisa. Thank you so much for sending your composition. It\'s nice to know that you enjoyed our topic. See you in our class.
T. Lorraine
Thank you teacher.
>>CORRECT
today topic is very interest.
>>Today\'s topic is very interesting.
This is my answer.
>>CORRECT
I agree this saying.
>>I agree with this saying.
Since early years we teach our parents.
>>>Since in the early years, our parents have been teaching us.
So parents must exemplary conduct. because half of our life live with together.
>>>So they must have an exemplary conduct, because we live half of our lives with them.
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