Homework
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Q: How should someone give feedback?
A: I think people should give feedback honestly and in a good way.
If people give a person feedback, and that person felt bad about it, it might bring a bad effect among those group members.
Also, if they don\'t become honest, then people might not catch the problems in them.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. If people give a person feedback, and that person felt bad about it, it might bring a bad effect among those group members.
3. Also, if they don\'t become honest, then people might not catch the problems in them.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think people should give feedback honestly and in a good way.
>>CORRECT!
2. If people give a person feedback, and that person felt bad about it, it might bring a bad effect among those group members.
>>If people give a person feedback, and that person feels bad about it, it might bring a bad effect among the other group members.
3. Also, if they don\'t become honest, then people might not catch the problems in them.
>>Also, if they don\'t become honest, then people might not catch the problems that they have.
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