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In my opinion, I don\'t fit into the service job.
I worked many part-time jobs for about 5 years.
For example, academy teacher, assistant, pasta restaurant, pork restaurant, and so on.
Communicating with a large number of strangers while working is a pleasant experience, but it has also made me feel tired that I must meet the needs of my customers. I don\'t hate cooperation, but if I ever get a job, I\'d rather deal with medical devices related to my major than deal with people. So I wouldn\'t work in a service job.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
I completely understand that working in a profession where you have to deal with people or deliver excellent customer service is not easy to do. That is why I like your emphasis on expressing a desire to work with devices rather than people.
Chammy
In my opinion, I don\'t fit into the service job.
OR
>> I don\'t think I belong in the service industry.
I worked many part-time jobs for about 5 years. For example, academy teacher, assistant, pasta restaurant, pork restaurant, and so on.
OR
>> For almost five years, I held a variety of part-time jobs, including those as an academy teacher, assistant, pasta restaurant, pig restaurant, and so forth.
Communicating with a large number of strangers while working is a pleasant experience, but it has also made me feel tired that I must meet the needs of my customers.
I don\'t hate cooperation, but if I ever get a job, I\'d rather deal with medical devices related to my major than deal with people. So I wouldn\'t work in a service job.
>>Correct
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