homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Do you have any sleeping disorders?
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I don\'t have any sleeping disorders. But i can\'t sleep comfortablely.
I don\'t know what happened while i was sleeping, When i wake up, i sore my back and neck.
i feel blue becase of sore, i feel bad.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [Name]!
I guess we all have discomforts while sleeping. You can check online how to have a good sleep, there are a lot of suggestions there especially if the cause of your discomfort is not a disorder.
Have a good holiday,
T. Aki~
I don\'t know what happened while i was sleeping, When i wake up, i sore my back and neck.
i feel blue becase of sore, i feel bad.
I don\'t have any sleeping disorders. But i can\'t sleep comfortablely.
>>> I don\'t have any sleeping disorders but I couldn\'t sleep comfortably.
I don\'t know what happened while i was sleeping, When i wake up, i sore my back and neck.
>>> I don\'t know what happens while I am asleep, when i wake up I have back pains and stiffed-neck.
i feel blue becase of sore, i feel bad.
>>> I feel blue because of the sore.
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