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The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.
I think the reason of that is lack of immune and
Eating a[이름]al isn\'t caused disease.
I don\'t know We should be vegetarian or keep eating a[이름]als.
I am already ate them and I learned young generation have to meat for their growth.
It is difficult to change our eating habits.
Science have to prove the theory that people must not to eat a[이름]als.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
You have freely expressed your thoughts well.
Thank you for this.
Have a great holiday!
T, Aki~
The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.
>>> The diseases are increasing these days although medical science are developing.
I think the reason of that is lack of immune and Eating a[이름]al isn\'t caused disease.
>>> I think the reason for that is lack of strong immunity and eating a[이름]als doesn\'t cause disease.
I don\'t know We should be vegetarian or keep eating a[이름]als.
>>> I don\'t know if we should be vegetarian or keep eating a[이름]als.
I am already ate them and I learned young generation have to meat for their growth.
>>> I have already eaten them and I learned the young generation has to meat for their growth.
It is difficult to change our eating habits.
>>> CORRECT!
Science have to prove the theory that people must not to eat a[이름]als.
>>> Science has to prove the theory that people must not eat a[이름]als.
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