Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. There is no one who provide what I need. I solve by myself what I need.
2. Everyone loves visible things. But the most valuable thing is invisible. I want to provide the invisible things such as love, respect and consideration for my loved ones.
강사 첨삭
Hi, David.
Great job on your homework! Your answers were well thought out and show a strong understanding of the material. Keep up the excellent work!
Regards,
Teacher Dana
Regards,
Teacher Dana
There is no one who provide what I need.
>>>There is no one who provides what I need. OR No one provides my needs.
I solve by myself what I need.
I solve by myself what I need.
>>>I solve what I need by myself.
Everyone loves visible things. But the most valuable thing is invisible.
>>>Everyone loves visible things, but the most valuable things are invisible.
I want to provide the invisible things such as love, respect and consideration for my loved ones.
>>>CORRECT or I want to offer the invisible things, such as love, respect, and consideration, to my loved ones.
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