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How do you prefer to keep in touch with friends? Do you call, chat online, exchange text messages, or write letters?
I usualy use the chat online app.
we have famus app in korea.
It is called KaKao Talk most koreans useing it also voice calling is free.
You can use it in another country.
I think The wire telephons are getting more disappear.
In my case I think I done\'t use almost about over 15 years.
I done have this now.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I have heard about Kakao Talk. In the Philippines, most pople use an app called \'Messenger\' and it\'s also for free. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I usualy use the chat online app.
>>I usually use an online chatting app.
we have famus app in korea.
we have famus app in korea.
>>We have a famous one in Korea.
It is called KaKao Talk
It is called KaKao Talk
>>Correct!
most koreans useing it also voice calling is free.
>>Most Koreans use it and also voice calls are free.
You can use it in another country.
You can use it in another country.
>>You can use it in other countries.
I think The wire telephons are getting more disappear.
I think The wire telephons are getting more disappear.
>>I think, wired telephones are disappearing.
In my case I think I done\'t use almost about over 15 years.
In my case I think I done\'t use almost about over 15 years.
>>In my case, I think, I have stopped using it for almost 15 years.
I done have this now.
I done have this now.
>>I don\'t even have one now.
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