Homework
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Q: How can you prevent sweating and shivering?
A: I can prevent sweating by being in a cool place.
I think there are some pills for preventing sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.
And people can wear more clothings to prevent shivering.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think there are some pills for preventing sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.
3. And people can wear more clothings to prevent shivering.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I can prevent sweating by being in a cool place.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think there are some pills for preventing sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.
>>I think there are some pills to prevent sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.
3. And people can wear more clothings to prevent shivering.
>>And people can wear more clothing to prevent shivering.
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