homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) She is collecting stickers, isn't she?
2) We often watch TV in the afternoon, don't we?
3) You have cleaned your bike, haven't you?
4) John and Max don't like Maths, do they?
5) Peter played handball yesterday, didn't he?
Tomorrow is Children's Day.
Many parents buy some presents for their child, go out to eat or for a picnic.
When I was child, I like that day but I don't like now.
The road must be a parking lot cause of traffic jam tomorrow.
And wherever should be crowded with people.
I wanted to go library or cafe to study tomorrow.
Tomorrow is holiday so the library don't open.
The cafe should be crowed with many couple dating.
I give up going out.
How can I enjoy my weekend?
Maybe I will do my hobboy that is a studing.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], Its a TGI Friday once again!!
Gob well done Miss. [Name]..
You were able to answer your homework correctly..
Talk to you agian later my dear and take care aways..
I hope you would enjoy your weekend Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) She is collecting stickers, isn\'t she? >>correct2) We often watch TV in the afternoon, don\'t we? >>correct3) You have cleaned your bike, haven\'t you? >>correct4) John and Max don\'t like Maths, do they? >>correct5) Peter played handball yesterday, didn\'t he?>>correctTomorrow is Children\'s Day.
>>correctMany parents buy some presents for their child, go out to eat or for a picnic.
>>My coworkers will buy some presents for their children and may go on a picnic.When I was child, I like that day but I don\'t like now.
>>correct
>>When I was a kind, I like celebrating Children\'s day but not anymore.The road must be a parking lot cause of traffic jam tomorrow.
>>The road may seem like a parking area for tomorrow there will surely be a heavy traffic.And wherever should be crowded with people.
>>And it will be very crowded anywhere.I wanted to go library or cafe to study tomorrow.
>>I wanted to go to the library or cafe to study tomorrow.Tomorrow is holiday so the library don\'t open.
>>But tomorrow is a holiday so librari won\'t be open.The cafe should be crowed with many couple dating.
>>Cafes will also be crowded because there will be many couple having their date.I give up going out.
>>I finally gave up.How can I enjoy my weekend?
>>correctMaybe I will do my hobboy that is a studing.
>>Maybe I will just do my hobby and that is studying.
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