Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Why are proper greeting necessary?
A: I think it\'s related to social relationships.
I think just by having greetings, people can make the bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.
Also, I think greeting could be the start of conversation for people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
3. Also, I think greeting could be the start of conversation for people.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think it\'s related to social relationships.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think just by having greetings, people can make the bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.
2. I think just by having greetings, people can make the bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.
>>I think just by greeting, people can make their bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.
3. Also, I think greeting could be the start of conversation for people.
>>CORRECT!
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