Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t care where I learn English.
I want to place for learning english which has nature like sea or mountains.
Because if I go to other country I will have the same chance to speak english where ever I go .
If I stay Philippines I will learn skin scubar and swim everyday.
If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains.
I like wandering in other country without booking a accommodation.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
Your homework shows your passion for learning English but your answer shows hitting two birds with one stone, learning and having fun. Choose wisely^^
Have a great day!
Aki~
I don\'t care where I learn English.
>>> CORRECT!
I want to place for learning english which has nature like sea or mountains.
>>> I want to place for learning English in a place that has nature like the sea or mountains.
Because if I go to other country I will have the same chance to speak english where ever I go .
>>> Because if I go to another country I will have the same chance to speak English where ever I go.
If I stay Philippines I will learn skin scubar and swim everyday.
>>> If I stay Philippines I will learn scuba diving and swim every day.
If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains.
>>> If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains.
I like wandering in other country without booking a accommodation.
>>> I like wandering in another country without booking an accommodation.
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