homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hellow teacher
Teacher, Can you recommend Pop song sing to me?
Homework
What are your favorite activities with friends these days?
My answer
These days , My favorite activities are soccer with my friends and swimming with them
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework question.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. These days , My favorite activities are soccer with my friends and swimming with them
>>These days, my favorite activities to do with my friends are soccer and swimming.
Song suggestions:
1. Fix You by Coldplay
2. Photograph by Ed Sheeran
3. One Day by Matisyahu
Note: These are just some songs that are safe to learn English from. Some songs are good but they don\'t make a lot of sense so I wouldn\'t recommend them. :)
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