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Dear [Name].Sally, Because I was absent from company for job interview yesterday, I was so busy working too much today. For this reason, I can't express my experience about special time of my life detail. Anyway, The most time in my life was occured from 2008 to 2009. When I'd left first company, I planned travelling. After deciding, I proceed travelling from China to India without any air freight. First destination was Vladivostok of Russia. I went there by sea. I took 1 day to stay in ship. Unfortunately, there was nothing to do there except sleeping. When I went there in July. But, its weather is like autumn in Korea. The city is famous for hometown of Mr.Putin who is president of Russin. Although it is the 2nd largest city in Russia, it was so silent. If there is any time to rest this summer, I want to visit again because our summer is very hot.

Hey [이름]^^Thank you so mucj for sending me your composition^_^ I envy you a lot because you have been in Russia.I hope I can visit there too^^ T. Sally Dear [Name].Sally, >>CORRECTBecause I was absent from company for job interview yesterday, I was so busyworking too much today. >>>>Because I was absent from the company for job interview yesterday, I was so busyworking today.For this reason, I can\'t express my experience about special time of my life detail. >>>For this reason, I can\'t express all the details about my experience during this special time of my life.Anyway, The most time in my life was occured from 2008 to 2009. >>>Anyway, the most special time in ly life happened from 2008 to 2009.When I\'d left first company, I planned travelling. >>>I lfet my company first and I planned to travel.After deciding, I proceed travelling from China to India without any air freight. >>>After deciding, I started travelling from China to India without any air fright.First destination was Vladivostok of Russia. >>My first destination was at Vladivostko in Russia.I went there by sea. >>I went there by ship. I took 1 day to stay in ship. >>>I stayed in ship for a day. Unfortunately, there was nothing to do there except sleeping. >>>CORRECTWhen I went there in July. But, its weather is like autumn in Korea. >>When I went there in July, the weather is like autumn in Korea.The city is famous for hometown of Mr.Putin who is president of Russin. >>>The city is famous for hometown of Mr. [Name] whi is the president of Russia.Although it is the 2nd largest city in Russia, it was so silent.>>>CORRECTIf there is any time to rest this summer, I want to visit again because our summer is very hot. >>>If I have time to rest this summer, I want to visit there again because our summer is very hot.