Homework
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Q: What are some things that you can enjoy on the weekends?
A: I think it\'s relaxing for myself, or hanging out with friends.
I think some people might enjoy relaxing because they\'ve worked all the weekdays, and they didn\'t have enough time to relax.
And I think others might like to hang out because they want some entertainments.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think some people might enjoy relaxing because they\'ve worked all the weekdays, and they didn\'t have enough time to relax.
3. And I think others might like to hang out because they want some entertainments.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think it\'s relaxing for myself or hanging out with friends.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think some people might enjoy relaxing because they\'ve worked all the weekdays, and they didn\'t have enough time to relax.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>I think some people might enjoy relaxing because they\'ve worked and didn\'t have enough time to relax during the weekdays.
3. And I think others might like to hang out because they want some entertainments.
>>I also think others might like to hang out because they want some entertainment/s.
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