Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In the old days, cartoons could learn about family and friendship, but today\'s cartoons can learn about various topics. In today\'s cartoons, there are times when there are things I didn\'t know.
강사 첨삭
Nicely done, Yira! Keep up the great work! See you in class!
- Teacher Angela
In the old days, cartoons could learn about family and friendship, but today\'s cartoons can learn about various topics.
>> In the old days, cartoons focused on family and friendship, but today\'s cartoons cover a variety of topics
In today\'s cartoons, there are times when there are things I didn\'t know.
>> In today\'s cartoons, there are moments when I learn things I didn\'t know before.
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