Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I take when go on a trip is phone, phone inverter, and friend or friends.
Because make trip more funny.
강사 첨삭
Hi, James! Thank you for these answers. It\'s nice sharing a good time with friends and make memories with them. I hope you can go to more trips soon. See you!
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I take when go on a trip is phone, phone inverter, and friend or friends.
>> I take my phone, phone inverter and friend or friends when I go on a trip.
Because make trip more funny.
Because make trip more funny.
>> It makes the trip more fun.
OR
>> I take my phone, phone inverter and friend or friends when I go on a trip because they make the trip more fun.
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