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I prefer people who can communicate well. Among them, I like people who have high self-esteem and are open about their feelings. Of course, although there are people who are too emotional or care only about their feelings, I like pure people. People who seem to be wearing masks are hard to get to know and to approach from the bottom of my heart.
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I prefer people who can communicate well.
Among them, I like people who have high self-esteem and are open about their feelings.
>>Correct
Of course, although there are people who are too emotional or care only about their feelings, I like pure people.
OR
>> Of course, I still appreciate people who are emotional and protective of themselves, but I prefer transparent people.
People who seem to be wearing masks are hard to get to know and to approach from the bottom of my heart.
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>>I really feel that it\'s difficult to get to know and approach people who appear to be wearing masks.
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