homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hellow teacher
Good evening
Sorry teacher I made a mistake to you yesterday
I make this mistake next time
Homework
Why is it important to have your own property?
My answer
I think important to have own property beacuse I will give it to my future child
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Don\'t worry about that minor issue. I understand that there are situations beyond our control.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I make this mistake next time
>>I won\'t make the same mistake next time.
2. I think important to have own property beacuse I will give it to my future child
>>I think it is important to have my own property because I will give it to my future child.
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