homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher Divina ,
Thank you always.
I organized the Dailogue part. Can you feedback to it?
Richard bought the blender but It was not working.
He wanted to get a replacement
So,He asked to Samantha
Samantha said, Sorry for the inconvenience
Samantha asked to him
Have you the receipt?
He gave it to her
So ,She gave to him a new one from the stockroom
Homework
What were some things that you had returned for replacement?
My answer
The things that I had returned for replacement was swimming pant and T-shirt
because The size didn\'t fit to me
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
He wanted to get a replacement So,He asked to Samantha
Samantha asked to him Have you the receipt?
So ,She gave to him a new one from the stockroom
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
Richard bought the blender but It was not working.
>>Richard bought a blender, but it was not working.
He wanted to get a replacement So,He asked to Samantha
>>He wanted to get a replacement, so he asked Samantha.
Samantha said, Sorry for the inconvenience
>>Samantha apologized for the inconvenience.
Samantha asked to him Have you the receipt?
>>She asked him if he had the receipt.
He gave it to her.
>>CORRECT!
So ,She gave to him a new one from the stockroom
>>So, she gave him a new one from the stockroom.
The things that I had returned for replacement was swimming pant and T-shirt because The size didn\'t fit to me
>>The things that I had returned for replacement were a swimming pants and a t-shirt because their sizes didn\'t fit me.
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