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I think spending time with my friends is the way to relax and it can help me to be patience about my problem.
Of course I might not follow their opinion.
But it also gives me help.
It seems to talk to others help me healty.
So when I make a plan with someone I don\'t considerate of my academyclass.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
We must have someone to talk to and let out our feelings. Appreciate those people.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I think spending time with my friends is the way to relax and it can help me to be patience about my problem.
>>> I think spending time with my friends is a way to relax and it can help me to be patient about my problem.
Of course, I might not follow their opinion.
>>> of course, I don\'t follow their advice.
But it also gives me help.
>>> CORRECT!
It seems to talk to others help me healthy.
>>> It seems that talking to others helps me to become healthy.
So when I make a plan with someone I don\'t considerate of my academyclass.
>>> So when I make a plan with someone I don\'t consider my academy class.
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