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2024-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: Does growing up with brothers or sisters affect a person\'s character? A: I think it can affect one\'s character. If people don\'t have any siblings, then when they\'re children, they usually have social interaction with their parents. But for those with siblings, they can have interaction with their peers, and it can affect one\'s character.

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Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think it can affect one\'s character.
>>CORRECT!

2. If people don\'t have any siblings, then when they\'re children, they usually have social interaction with their parents.
>>If people don\'t have any siblings, then as kids, they usually have social interaction with their parents.

3. But for those with siblings, they can have interaction with their peers, and it can affect one\'s character.
>>CORRECT!

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