Homework
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1. Which among your stuff do you need to throw away?
A) There are many books in my house. The first thing to throw away is the books.
There are books that my two daughters have read since they were young, and there are essays and novels that I bought and read.
In my experience, I have never read these books twice.
It would have been better if I bought a book and gave it to someone as a gift after reading it.
2. Which is always the best part of your day?
A) No matter how much I think about it, there is not the best time of the day.
If I have to tell about this, I think the best time was when I did my best.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
1. Which among your stuff do you need to throw away?
A) There are many books in my house. The first thing to throw away is the books.
A) There are many books in my house. The first thing to throw away is the books.
>> There are many books in my house, and the first thing I would consider getting rid of is the books themselves.
There are books that my two daughters have read since they were young, and there are essays and novels that I bought and read.
>> Some are books that my two daughters have read since they were young, while others are essays and novels that I bought and read.
>> Some are books that my two daughters have read since they were young, while others are essays and novels that I bought and read.
In my experience, I have never read these books twice.
>> Correct
>> Correct
OR >> Based on my experience, I have never read these books a second time.
It would have been better if I bought a book and gave it to someone as a gift after reading it.
>> It would have been better if I had bought a book and given it as a gift after reading it.
>> It would have been better if I had bought a book and given it as a gift after reading it.
2. Which is always the best part of your day?
A) No matter how much I think about it, there is not the best time of the day.
>> No matter how much I think about it, there isn’t a definitive best time of day.
If I have to tell about this, I think the best time was when I did my best.
>> If I had to choose, I believe the best time is when I am doing my best.
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