Homework
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Q: What happens after a goal is achieved?
A: I think people would feel the accomplishment and fulfillment after achieving goals.
Also, I think people would make a new goal, and I think it would be a higher goal because people have desire to become better.
I think repeating to make goals and achive them is the process of developing oneself.
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2. Also, I think people would make a new goal, and I think it would be a higher goal because people have desire to become better.
3. I think repeating to make goals and achive them is the process of developing oneself.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think people would feel the accomplishment and fulfillment after achieving goals.
>>CORRECT!
2. Also, I think people would make a new goal, and I think it would be a higher goal because people have desire to become better.
>>Also, I think people would make a new and higher goal, because they have the desire to become better.
3. I think repeating to make goals and achive them is the process of developing oneself.
>>I think the repetition of making goals and achieving them is the process of developing oneself.
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