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2024-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Hi teacher Divina. I need to try speaking English, but I didn\'t hear the things that you speak English finally I didn\'t understand.. I\'m sorry.. I will try!! Homework Are you always updated with the latest trend? Why or Why not? My answer I updated the trend in the past but I not updated it now because these days I get many lazy. I make to sentence. Can you feedback the sentence? 1.Connect calling tp me right now. 2. Jeju Island don\'t have connected the bridge.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. I think that when it comes to learning, the place also plays an important role.
Is it possible for you to find a quieter place? Maybe it will be easier for you that way. 
Thank you for always trying. :)

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I updated the trend in the past but I not updated it now because these days I get many lazy.
>>I used to be updated with the trend, but I got lazy, so I\'m not so updated about it now.

2. Connect calling tp me right now.
>>You can connect by calling me right now.

3. Jeju Island don\'t have connected the bridge.
>>Jeju Island is not connected by a bridge.

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