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We need a technical way for recycling textile for lessening its trash.
It is not easy for us to change the shopping habits.
We prefer good quality of clothing .
If the recycling clothing is the same material as the old ones,
We will buy it.
I think if it possible I hope textile waste could change to structures or electronic goods.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]ny!
You have a good point!
People have always ben used to a shopping lifestyle and it is not easy to take that away unless it is one\'s decision to be a mi[이름]alist. (but not everyone is like that). With our technology rising, scientists may create a substance that will shorten the decomposition of textiles.
Have a beautiful day!
Aki~
We need a technical way for recycling textile for lessening its trash.
>>> We need a technical way to recycle textiles to lessen the trash.
It is not easy for us to change the shopping habits.
>>> CORRECT!
We prefer good quality clothing.
>>> CORRECT!
If the recycling clothing is the same material as the old ones,We will buy it.
>>> If the recycled clothing has the same quality and material, then we will buy it.
I think if it possible I hope textile waste could change to structures or electronic goods.
>>> CORRECT!
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