Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What are the rules you usually break?
A) Before I go to bed every day, I organize the rules I have to do tomorrow.
However, I can\'t keep about half of it.
It\'s not a social law, it\'s a law I set myself.
2. What do you do after learning that you did something wrong?
A) I have that experience.
I did something socially reprehensible, but no one knew.
I went to the police station by myself and admitted my mistake.
But no one punished me for that.
I didn\'t want to be a shameful father to my two daughters.
강사 첨삭
Hi David,
Great job on answering the questions! To improve, try adding more detail and examples to show a deeper understanding. Also, keep your answers focused and consider offering more of your own analysis where possible. Keep up the good work!
Regards,
Teacher Dana
A) Before I go to bed every day, I organize the rules I have to do tomorrow.
>>>Before I go to bed each day, I organize the rules or tasks I need to follow for the next day.
However, I can\'t keep about half of it.
>>>CORRECT or However, I usually only manage to follow about half of them.
It\'s not a social law, it\'s a law I set myself.
>>>They aren’t social rules, but personal ones I set for myself.
2. What do you do after learning that you did something wrong?
A) I have that experience.
2. What do you do after learning that you did something wrong?
A) I have that experience.
>>>I’ve experienced this before
I did something socially reprehensible, but no one knew.
>>>I had done something socially wrong, but no one knew about it.
I went to the police station by myself and admitted my mistake.
>>>CORRECT
But no one punished me for that.
>>>CORRECT or combine it with the previous sentence.
I didn\'t want to be a shameful father to my two daughters.
>>>CORRECT
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