Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for answering this homework. Your insights are really good. It shows so much character. I am glad to be your English tutor. Continue to practice constructing your sentences better.
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Teacher Dana
A) I remember I have had a few experiences a long time ago.
>>>I remember having a few such experiences a long time ago.
But I can\'t remember what really happened.
>>>CORRECT
Maybe it wasn\'t important.
>>>CORRECT
However, in my opinion, I think that the dream that I really want to achieve was achieved by appearing in a dream, and in the future, it actually appeared as a result like a dream.
>>>In my opinion, the dream I truly wanted to achieve first appeared in a dream, and later it became a reality, just as I had dreamed.
I don\'t think the story of Joseph in the Bible appears in reality anymore.
>>>I don\'t think stories like Joseph\'s from the Bible happen in real life anymore.
A) There are many times.
>>>This has happened to me many times.
But there seem to be many reasons to feel that way.
>>>CORRECT
There are cases that the face looks normal and looks like I\'ve seen it somewhere.
>>>Sometimes, a person\'s face seems familiar, as if I\'ve seen it somewhere before.
Or sometimes I actually saw it but I can\'t remember it.
>>>Or perhaps I\'ve seen them before but can\'t remember where.
And like the story in the drama, it\'s actually someone, but there may be cases that the person has amnesia.
>>>Like in a drama, it could actually be someone I know, but they might have amnesia.
It\'s a heartbreaking story, of course.
>>>CORRECT
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