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Q: How can a lot of stress affect your physical health?
A: I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, they directly have a physical effect.
I\'m not actually sure about it, but I think I\'ve heard that the blood flows faster so their body temperature gets higher.
Also, I think while people are under stress, they can\'t get to sleep easily, and I think it would also affect physical health.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I\'m not actually sure about it, but I think I\'ve heard that the blood flows faster so their body temperature gets higher.
3. Also, I think while people are under stress, they can\'t get to sleep easily, and I think it would also affect physical health.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, they directly have a physical effect.
>>I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, it has a direct physical effect on them.
2. I\'m not actually sure about it, but I think I\'ve heard that the blood flows faster so their body temperature gets higher.
>>I\'m not actually sure about it, but I\'ve heard that the blood flows faster when they\'re stressed, so their body temperature gets higher.
3. Also, I think while people are under stress, they can\'t get to sleep easily, and I think it would also affect physical health.
>>Also, I think while people are under stress, they can\'t get to sleep easily, so it would also affect their physical health.
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