homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. teacher Divisan
See you on Monday
Homework
What are the benefits of learning English?
My answer
I need to learn and study English to go to Canada. and I need to speak English well,
Because I will go to many trip abroad in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. See you on Monday!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I need to learn and study English to go to Canada.
>>CORRECT!
>>CORRECT!
2. and I need to speak English well, Because I will go to many trip abroad in the future.
>>I need to speak English well because I need to go to many trips abroad in the future.
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