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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about “ageing”.
Sure, I can help you with your resume. We can talk about this later in class. See you!
-Teacher Ash
“Age gracefully” mean to me is being get inclusion and compassion person.
>> “Age gracefully” means being an inclusive and compassionate person.
when I was young, I was really annoying to who someone do that I don’t understand.
>>When I was young, I was annoyed by people who didn’t think like me.
but I’m getting understand to why does who someone action do that.
>>I’m trying to understand why they think like that.
Actually, even though I still angry when someone do that sometimes.
>> I still get mad when I encounter people like that though.
I feel like, It’s makes me feeling I’m better growing up then yesterday.I want to be more better person.
>> Nevertheless, I have grown in maturity throughout the years, and I aspire to keep evolving.
Actually, I have to drop my resume at farm.
>> I have to drop my resume at the farm.
so I want you could confirm my resume on Monday.
>>So, I want you to edit my resume on Monday.
Is it possible that you confirm it?
>> Is it okay for you to check it?
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