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If I want to be more slim.
Gym pt can give me a diet program for free.
But I have to buy some diet meal expensive like protein or substitutes.
We also know which food is bad for diet or not
and when we Shouldn\'t intake food too.
It only depends on my patience of eating when I feel hungry.
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Hi Ms. [이름]ny!
I would have to agree with you. To be honest, some gym trainers give you different advice not to benefit you but to benefit them and get more clients. unless you also want to build muscles then you have to take their 100% advice and recommendations.
Enjoy!
Aki~
If I want to be more slim, Gym pt can give me a diet program for free.
>> If I want to be more slim, my gym trainer can give me a diet program for free.
But I have to buy some diet meal expensive like protein or substitutes.
>>> But I have to buy some expensive diet meals like protein or substitutes.
We also know which food is bad for diet or not
>>> We also know which food is bad or not for a diet.
and when we Shouldn\'t intake food too.
>>> and we shouldn\'t take that food too.
It only depends on my patience of eating when I feel hungry.
>> CORRECT!
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