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2012-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Are they new here? No, they aren't. 2) Is your classroom big? Yes, it is. 3) Are you from Scotland? Yes, I am. 4) Is your van green? No, it isn't. 5) Are the DVDs in this box? Yes, they are. The boiler in my house is some problems. I turn on the function of hot water, my room is heated. The hot water pipes seem to cross in the center of floor. I think it is a design error in boiler system. By the way, I want only hot water, not heating during shower. I take a shower in Summer, my house turn into the souna. After taking a shower, I perspire cause of my hot room. I have an air condition, it couldn't win of heating. Besides, I didn't clean my air condition yet. Before I go to the church, I took a shower yesterday. My room was getting hotter. When I came back home from the church, it was 32 degrees in my house. I turned on a fan but I couldn't s[이름]p cause of hot temperature.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Miss. [Name]! Wow, I guess Im gonna love your house my dear, because its not just a house but a sauna at the same time, kkk.. Maybe, you need to ask the owner of the house so they could do something about this.. Cant wait to talk to you again about this Miss. [Name]..:) Teacher Cam^^ 1) Are they new here? No, they aren\'t.>>correct2) Is your classroom big?Yes, it is.>>correct3) Are you from Scotland? Yes, I am.>>correct4) Is your van green? No, it isn\'t.>>correct5) Are the DVDs in this box? Yes, they are.>>correctThe boiler in my house is some problems. >>There is something wrong with my heater in my house.I turn on the function of hot water, my room is heated.>>When I turn the hot water on, my room will become warm. The hot water pipes seem to cross in the center of floor. >>The hot water pipes seem to cross in the center of the floor. I think it is a design error in boiler system. >>correctBy the way, I want only hot water, not heating during shower. >>By the way, I only want hot water not heating while having my shower..I take a shower in Summer, my house turn into the souna. >>When I take a shower in Summer, my house is turned into a sauna.After taking a shower, I perspire cause of my hot room. >>correctI have an air condition, it couldn\'t win of heating. >>I have an air conditioner but it\'s not effective.Besides, I didn\'t clean my air condition yet. >>correctBefore I go to the church, I took a shower yesterday. >>before I go to church, I usually take a shower.My room was getting hotter. >>correctWhen I came back home from the church, it was 32 degrees in my house. >>correctI turned on a fan but I couldn\'t s[이름]p cause of hot temperature. >>I turned on the fan but I still couldn\'t s[이름]p because of the hot temperature inside my house.

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