Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, jewel.
It’s a nice day, although It’s rainning and windy.
I attatched my yesterday homework.
Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! It\'s rainy and windy here in my place, too. Anyway, I am wondering what this paper snack is that you mentioned in your homework. ^^ Tell me more about it! Thank you and have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I seldom watch TV programs which is selling somethings.
>>I seldom watch TV programs that are selling something.
One day, I happened to watch a program while changing the TV channel.
>>One day, I happened to watch a program while changing the TV channel.
It is a kind of healthy food and looks like small paper difference from others.
>>It is a kind of healthy food and looks like small paper, different from others.
The seller said that the paper had a lot of nutritions.
The seller said that the paper had a lot of nutritions.
>>The seller said that the paper had a lot of nutrients.
And it is easy to eat.
And it is easy to eat.
>>CORRECT
So, I bought them which I could have for 1 year.
So, I bought them which I could have for 1 year.
>>So, I bought them, and I could have them for one year.
Cut it half, I gave it to my mom and have been eat the other half.
Cut it half, I gave it to my mom and have been eat the other half.
>>I cut it in half, gave one part to my mom, and have been eating the other half.
I don’t know how much be healthier than befor.
I don’t know how much be healthier than befor.
>>I don’t know how much healthier it is than before.
But I’m sure that it is absolutely delious.
But I’m sure that it is absolutely delious.
>>But I’m sure that it is absolutely delicious.
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