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Q: What qualities should a good boss have?
A: I think a good boss should have a good mindset.
If a boss doesn\'t have a good mindset, no one would try to be an employee under him or her, but if not, people would try to be an employee.
Also, I think good boss need the strong determination.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If a boss doesn\'t have a good mindset, no one would try to be an employee under him or her, but if not, people would try to be an employee.
3. Also, I think good boss need the strong determination.
Thank you for doing your homework.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think a good boss should have a good mindset.
>>CORRECT!
2. If a boss doesn\'t have a good mindset, no one would try to be an employee under him or her, but if not, people would try to be an employee.
>>If a boss doesn\'t have a good mindset, no one would try to be an employee under him/her, otherwise people would try to be his/her employee.
3. Also, I think good boss need the strong determination.
>>Also, I think a good boss needs strong determination.
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