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Women are influenced trend and trend is deeply related to fashion.
But sports trend is changing too fast.
So we need to more clothing to enjoy new sports.
Ability of buying and vanity is good resources to stimulate people.
It made people divide between rich and poor.
But I think that is short pleasure.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
Your call ( it\'s up to you). On one hand, if expensive workout clothes make you feel more motivated and comfortable, then great. On the other hand, it\'s more about getting active than making a fashion statement. If your budget allows and it makes you happy, why not? But it\'s not a necessity for getting a good workout in.
Enjoy exercising!
Aki~
Women are influenced trend and trend is deeply related to fashion.
>> Women are influenced by trends that are deeply related to fashion.
But sports trend is changing too fast.
>> But the sports trend is changing too fast.
So we need to more clothing to enjoy new sports.
>> CORRECT!
Ability of buying and vanity is good resources to stimulate people.
>> The ability to buy and vanity are good resources to stimulate people.
It made people divide between rich and poor.
>> It creates a gap between the rich and the poor.
But I think that is short pleasure.
>> But I think that is a fleeting moment.
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