Homework
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Q) Use three words to describe a wonderful stay in a hotel. Explain why you chose those words.
A) Travel, freedom, and relaxation.
All hotels have different environments and locations.
So just staying in a hotel makes me feel like traveling.
I always feel free every time I stay in a hotel.
At least here, I am freed from the sense of duty to do something on time.
Isn\'t it just meals that should be done on time?
I also feel free when it comes to choosing meals.
I can choose anything and don\'t have to eat.
All of these actions give me a relaxation not only physically but also mentally.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
All hotels have different environments and locations. So just staying in a hotel makes me feel like traveling.
>> All hotels offer unique environments and locations, so simply staying in one makes me feel like I\'m traveling.
OR >> Each hotel has its own unique atmosphere and setting, so just staying at one gives me a sense of being on a journey.
I always feel free every time I stay in a hotel.
>> CORRECT
OR >>Every time I stay in a hotel, I feel free.
At least here, I am freed from the sense of duty to do something on time.
>> CORRECT
OR>> At least here, I’m relieved from the constant sense of duty to be on time.
Isn\'t it just meals that should be done on time?
>> Aren’t meals the only things that need to happen at set times?
I also feel free when it comes to choosing meals.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I also feel free in choosing what to eat;
I can choose anything and don\'t have to eat.
>> I can pick anything or choose not to eat at all.
All of these actions give me a relaxation not only physically but also mentally.
>> All these experiences provide me with relaxation—not only physically but also mentally.
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