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학생이 쓴 원문
I went to Da Nang, I swam at the beach and hotel pool.I went to the Hoian market.I saw the Marble Mountain too
I enjoyed that i visited many places and rested hotel
강사 첨삭
Hi Eric,
Thanks for sharing your trip. It surely relaxing to stay at the hotel! =)
-Teacher Ash
I went to Da Nang, I swam at the beach and hotel pool.
>> I went to Da Nang and swam at the beach and the hotel pool.
I went to the Hoian market.I saw the Marble Mountain too
>> I also went to the Hoian market and saw the Marble Mountain.
I enjoyed that i visited many places and rested hotel
>> I enjoyed resting at the hotel and visiting many places.
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