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Q: Do you like to visit attractions visited by many people? Why or why not?
A: I don\'t actually like to go those attractions.
If someone invites me or I need to go with someone, I\'ll go there, but if I\'m traveling alone, I won\'t.
I kind of feel dizzy when I\'m in a place where a lot of people are in.
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2. If someone invites me or I need to go with someone, I\'ll go there, but if I\'m traveling alone, I won\'t.
3. I kind of feel dizzy when I\'m in a place where a lot of people are in.
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I don\'t actually like to go those attractions.
>>I don\'t actually like to go to those attractions.
2. If someone invites me or I need to go with someone, I\'ll go there, but if I\'m traveling alone, I won\'t.
>>CORRECT!
3. I kind of feel dizzy when I\'m in a place where a lot of people are in.
>>I kind of feel dizzy when I\'m in a place with a lot of people.
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