Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher Divina.
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
What do you do if your schedule gets too overwhelming?
My answer
I will win my schedule that It gets too overwhelming.
I think It is an experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I\'d like to know more about your answer so please feel free to share it tomorrow, okay?
See you!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I will win my schedule that It gets too overwhelming.
>>I will change my schedule when it gets too overwhelming.
2. I think It is an experience.
>>I think it is part of the experience.
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