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2024-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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I’ve been to taiwan with sister. We went to the YehLiu Gropark. I saw stone of various shape. It was wonderful.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

It sounds like you had a wonderful experience visiting Taiwan with your sister! Yehliu Geopark is a fascinating place, and seeing all the different rock formations must have been memorable. I\'m glad you enjoyed it!

~ Teacher Trixia


CONTENT:

I’ve been to taiwan with sister.

- I went to Taiwan with my sister.

We went to the YehLiu Gropark.

- We went to Yehliu Geopark.

I saw stone of various shape.

- I saw stones of various shapes.

It was wonderful.

- It was wonderful.


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