Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher Divina.
Happy Wendnesday! Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
What are the fun things that you do when you have free time?
My answer
If I have free time, I will study English and exercise, I will go to a pretty cafe to see the sunset and eat dinner and drink alcohol and talk about the old days with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. If I have free time, I will study English and exercise, I will go to a pretty cafe to see the sunset and eat dinner and drink alcohol and talk about the old days with my friends.
>>If I have free time, I study English and exercise.
>>I also go to a pretty cafe to see the sunset, eat dinner, drink alcohol, and talk about the old days with my friends.
2. Happy Wendnesday!
>>Happy Wednesday!
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