Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Halloween is not big fastival in Korea.
So, I don’t know very well.
I remembed Halloween event when I was young at an English academy. I played tricr or treat.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It\'s interesting to hear that Halloween isn’t widely celebrated in Korea. I\'d like to know more about it!
Your memory of playing trick-or-treat at the English academy sounds like a fun experience!
~ Teacher Trixia
CONTENT:
Halloween is not big fastival in Korea.
- Halloween is not a big festival in Korea.
So, I don’t know very well.
- So, I don’t know much about it.
I remembed Halloween event when I was young at an English academy.
- I remember a Halloween event when I was young at an English academy.
I played tricr or treat.
- I played trick-or-treat.
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