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I am not interested in politics and other people who don\'t have relationship with me.
I don\'t like watching news and discussion program .
Thesedays competition for choosing singer and dancer and relationship solutions program is popular.
In addition people like watching program about others life and choosing partners .
But I don\'t.
Sometimes I don\'t have information of them.
So I can\'t participate in tv program with others.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]ny!
Contrary to what others don\'t, I have been very attentive to current issues especially if they have an impact on my life. Like weather, politics, and economy. In this way, I would be able to understand when know what to do in such a situation. However, entertainment like idols and celebrities are the last issue that I pay attention to.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I am not interested in politics and other people who don\'t have relationship with me.
>>> I am not interested in politics and other people who don\'t have a relationship with me.
I don\'t like watching news and discussion program .
>>> I don\'t like watching news and Talk shows or panel discussion programs.
Thesedays competition for choosing singer and dancer and relationship solutions program is popular.
>>> These days competitions for choosing singers and dancers and relationship solutions programs are popular.
>>> These days, singing and dance contests and adive and dating shows are popular programs.
In addition people like watching program about others life and choosing partners .
>>> In addition, people like watching real-life programs and dating shows.
But I don\'t.
>>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I don\'t have information of them.
>>> Sometimes I don\'t have information about them.
So I can\'t participate in tv program with others.
>>> So I can\'t participate in the TV program with others.
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