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When people became over 50years old.
We can see their lifestyle with their facial expression.
There is a saying \"people have to take responsiblity with their own face When they were 50 years old.\"
I want my face looking comfortable and not greedy.
I think That is the most graced aging.
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]ny!
I read your answer and I was quite impressed that you talked about reality and acceptance here.
We have peace of mind, save money, and enjoy things better way if we understand aging gracefully.
Have a great day!
Aki~
When people became over 50years old.
>>> When people become over 50 years old.
We can see their lifestyle with their facial expression.
>>> We can observe their lifestyle through their facial expressions.
>>> We can observe their lifestyle through their face.
There is a saying \"people have to take responsiblity with their own face When they were 50 years old.\"
>>> There is a saying \"People have to take responsibility with their face when they are 50 years old.\"
I want my face looking comfortable and not greedy.
>>> I want my face to look comfortable and not greedy.
I think That is the most graced aging.
>>> I think that is what I know as aging gracefully.
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