homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Have you got a sister?
- Yes, I have.
2) Has she got a dog?
- Yes, she has.
3) Have they got a green van?
- No, they haven't.
4) Has he got two sisters?
- No, he hasn't.
5) Have we got nice teachers?
- Yes, we have.
Today is Parents' Day.
My brother and I decided that we will give my morther some money this Parents' Day.
I sended my allotment to my brother, he was going to surprise my mom to give some money and a carnation.
We just skipped to do nothing last Parents' Day.
My morther mightn't expect to recieve some present.
I called my mom today morning with my thinking that my mom is pleased.
But I was scolded by my mom.
My mom said that she doesn't want to recieve any present,
just want that I get married and my brother doesn't quit working any more.
I'm sorry, mother. Your hope is not to be able to do myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you for making your homework and I also want to say thank you for sharing a bit about what your mom told you over the phone.
Maybe your mom just wants you to be happy Miss. [Name], but like what I told you before, if youre hapy with your situation right now, just go for it okay?
I know your mom will also be very happy for you because you are happy as well..
Anyway, talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam
1) Have you got a sister? - Yes, I have.
>>correct2) Has she got a dog? - Yes, she has.
>>correct3) Have they got a green van? - No, they haven\'t.>>correct4) Has he got two sisters?- No, he hasn\'t.
>>correct5) Have we got nice teachers? - Yes, we have.>>correctToday is Parents\' Day.
>>correctMy brother and I decided that we will give my morther some money this Parents\' Day.
>>correctI sended my allotment to my brother, he was going to surprise my mom to give some money and a carnation.
>>I sent my allotment to my brother, he was going to surprise our mom by giving some money and some carnations.We just skipped to do nothing last Parents\' Day.
>>correct
>>Last Parent\'s day we did nothing.My morther mightn\'t expect to recieve some present.
>>correct..just observe correct spelling of mother,:)I called my mom today morning with my thinking that my mom is pleased.
>>I called my mom this morning to make her pleased.But I was scolded by my mom.
>>correctMy mom said that she doesn\'t want to recieve any present, just want that I get married and my brother doesn\'t quit working any more.
>>My mom just told me that she doesn\'t want any presents. And all she wants is for me to get married nd my brother not to quit his job anymore.I\'m sorry, mother. Your hope is not to be able to do myself.
>>I just said sorry to my mom and told her that I won\'t be able to fulfill her dream for now.
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